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November 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Still no opinion yet . . . .
I'm not sure what you're trying to do with this . . . Having Ienzo in here instead of Zexion is . . . confusing, but I'm sure you have a reason.
Axel being a wolf was interesting, not exactly what I was expecting, but I'll go with it. I'm wondering if it's a thing with rival packs, and they are hunting from the same academy, which is bad, or if if Axel has been teamed up with some demon hunters in hope of getting a cure for his condition. . .
And now I'm worried about what's up with Riku.
I hope the re-writing goes well.
I'm not sure what you're trying to do with this . . . Having Ienzo in here instead of Zexion is . . . confusing, but I'm sure you have a reason.
Axel being a wolf was interesting, not exactly what I was expecting, but I'll go with it. I'm wondering if it's a thing with rival packs, and they are hunting from the same academy, which is bad, or if if Axel has been teamed up with some demon hunters in hope of getting a cure for his condition. . .
And now I'm worried about what's up with Riku.
I hope the re-writing goes well.
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September 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Interesting . . .
It' too short to give a full review, so maybe after the next, or next few parts/chapters I'll be able to tell you more.
Right now the plot looks promising, and I want to know who else is in this, and why Xemnas!?
The only other thing I can say is to find a beta/proofreader to help with the spelling and grammar.
Otherwise, I'll be following this. Until whenever!
It' too short to give a full review, so maybe after the next, or next few parts/chapters I'll be able to tell you more.
Right now the plot looks promising, and I want to know who else is in this, and why Xemnas!?
The only other thing I can say is to find a beta/proofreader to help with the spelling and grammar.
Otherwise, I'll be following this. Until whenever!