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for Atmospheric Pressure

by Starryeyedstar

schedule March 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Amount Axel paid first: $200
Amount Axel handed next: $100
Drinks: (maybe) $50
Axel's bail: nonexistent

BTW this was an amasing and hilarious oneshot!!! Lllllloooooovvvvvvveeeeeeeeeeddddddddd-iit!
schedule October 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
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Ending = Epic lawl.

This was utterly adorable. And perfect. And much more solid grammatically than your normal works. It was nicely paced, well thought out, everything! I loved this sooooo much. The way all the characters interacted with one another, the hinting at the up-coming relationship between Sora and Riku--which leaves a convenient loop-hole for a continuation--and the repeated attempts by Axel to get at Roxas. Pure wonderfulness. ^_^

If you can't bring yourself to do short one-shots and PWP anymore, don't worry! Because if you keep turning out well-crafted shorts like these, no-one will mind.

Keep it up! Good luck writing!
person TheSimi
schedule October 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh this was wonderful and amazing and awesome and...and...just great!

I love the way you write Sora and Riku and your Axel just cracks me up.

Thank you so very much for a truly lovely story!

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