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October 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my GOD!
YES!
Hey, this was so well written... man, I was gonna melt reading that.
I seriously applaude your work and can hardly wait for the next part.
I do have a word of advice.
When altering a scene or making time skip by, put a line of *************
That way you get a nice break.
It's the ONLY thing I can think of your altering to make your writing better.
YES!
Hey, this was so well written... man, I was gonna melt reading that.
I seriously applaude your work and can hardly wait for the next part.
I do have a word of advice.
When altering a scene or making time skip by, put a line of *************
That way you get a nice break.
It's the ONLY thing I can think of your altering to make your writing better.