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October 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I loved this! It was so adorable.
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October 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
O__O!
Dear goodness! Your style is completely different, now, from when you started!
I like it. ^_^ There is sooooooo much more detail, and the longer chapters and . . . . . .
If you got yourself a beta, it shows. And if you haven't gotten a beta, then it shows how much dedication you've put into this by going back over and smoothing thing out and polishing up the language.
And this was a wonderful explanation chapter/story. (if this was a one-shot, cool. If this is the 1st part of a new story, cool. If this is the 1st chapter of an anthology, very cool.) I'm glad to know what's going on.
I'll be keeping my eyes open for more of these.
(And I still vote that Roxas somehow ends up with Axel, and that Axel is at least a pure-blood wolf, or at most a freaking legendary/mythical spirit/god wolfie, because karma works that way. ^_^)
Until next time, good luck.
Dear goodness! Your style is completely different, now, from when you started!
I like it. ^_^ There is sooooooo much more detail, and the longer chapters and . . . . . .
If you got yourself a beta, it shows. And if you haven't gotten a beta, then it shows how much dedication you've put into this by going back over and smoothing thing out and polishing up the language.
And this was a wonderful explanation chapter/story. (if this was a one-shot, cool. If this is the 1st part of a new story, cool. If this is the 1st chapter of an anthology, very cool.) I'm glad to know what's going on.
I'll be keeping my eyes open for more of these.
(And I still vote that Roxas somehow ends up with Axel, and that Axel is at least a pure-blood wolf, or at most a freaking legendary/mythical spirit/god wolfie, because karma works that way. ^_^)
Until next time, good luck.