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May 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I just recently found this, and lemme tell you, I wish I found it earlier.
Its was perfect. Their personalities were great and on target, everything was built up well, and I horny as shit and wish I could've jumped into the scene with the two of them.
I definately look foward to more of your work :)
Its was perfect. Their personalities were great and on target, everything was built up well, and I horny as shit and wish I could've jumped into the scene with the two of them.
I definately look foward to more of your work :)
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November 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
There's really not enough for this couple at all~! This was a really good take on them, I really liked the slightly teasing, almost sarcastic view of Oscar. It's an interesting characterization, one I don't think I've seen before.
However, Kieran seemed to need a little more..pep? He was kind of lacking in the exclamation points. The sex scene was done well, not too clinical or too soft. A nice mix.
Hope to see you write more. Cheers.
However, Kieran seemed to need a little more..pep? He was kind of lacking in the exclamation points. The sex scene was done well, not too clinical or too soft. A nice mix.
Hope to see you write more. Cheers.
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October 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
-rubs eyes and gasps- I thought I would NEVER see a Path of Radiance pairing like this! -gets all crazy-. I've been waiting to read a pairing like this FOREVER! Good work! You should do some more PoR fics like this! =D