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for The Passionate Beat

by crymsonpassion

schedule March 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*SQUEEEEE*

I love how devious Zexy is in this thing, and how heartbreakign Demy is. I hope the next one isn't too far away, but I'll just have to keep re-reading Zexy's part in this chapter lol.

And I just can't see the Demy you've got here as the seme. Zexy's too manical and well devious to be the uke.
person Zura
schedule January 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Actually, the whole fact that the story seem to circle around AkuRoku and RiSo is annoying me a little bit. Not only because I don't really care for either of them (especially AkuRoku, it's yucky), but right now, it seems that you focus just a tad bit more on them then Demyx... I understand there aren't much Zexion yet (but I'm looking forward to his introduction, favorite as he is), so I'll look forward to that.

And I don't know if I reviewed this before, or not, but I'm really hoping for a decent Dexion (Demyx on top FTW) for once. Zemyx are EVERYWHERE to read, and I can actually not see Demyx as an uke (which is why I had a hard time reading for other story, Accidental Infatuations, I can't spell anymore), so yeah, I'm totally rooting for Dexion, because it's far more rare, and we Dexion fans need some loving too.

And also because this story seem to be a real ass kicker, it would be such a shame if I would need to dump this to, because Zemyx scare me so badly.
schedule January 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
It's been a while since I read something that had me laughing that much. : D
You have the most hilarious phrases every now and then, they make my stomach ache when I can't stop chuckling. 8DD

But you do know how to write serious pieces, too - that much became clear with the second chapter. :3

I'm just sad since there is no more to read. D':
To quote our beloved Miss Spears:
GIMME MORE.

As in, you've done a very good job, keep it up. : D

Also, my vote goes for Zemyx. >.>
person Kareki
schedule January 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Gotta say, Roxas and Sora as sex fiends is downright adorable. Absolutely love it. <3
Zemyx or Dexion, either way-- but if Zexion is being uke, I think he'd have to be tough uke. He's definitely not the whimpering submitting type.
Purelove this fic so far! Keep up the awesome! ^^
person StalkerChick92
schedule January 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hellu! ^_^

me luffles the alarm clock scenario!! i can totally c that happening to poor demy lmao!

the twins had ice cream 4 breakfast!? O.O *runs and hides*
.....*runs out to drag computer into hiding as well*

but anyways..... i luv this fic! u did a great job ^_^
person Minamino
schedule November 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it. I like your descriptions and everything. And I love Sora and Roxas as the evil twins. Mwa ha! Whatever pairing you have this turn into, I think I will keep an eye out for this fic. Hope the next chapter comes really really soon!
person Zura
schedule November 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I, for my part, hopes this will turn into a Dexion (because Demyx is WAY more seme then Zexion EVER will be), and there is enough Zemyx to last for three lifetimes. Please, Dexion, or I might just implode.

Other then that, I ADORE the beginning with the whole clock scenario. I more or less skipped all the smut, or whatever that was, since I care very little of AkuRoku and RiSo. Huh... Never cared much about either of them actually. But since this is supposed to be Dexion (I can hope, right?), I hope to see LOT of that, and not as much of AkuRoku and RiSo.

Anyway, I really like this. You can write, that much is obvious, so I will look forward to read more of this (unless it turns out to be Zemyx (seme!Zexion that is), then I will think it over and I may or may not continue. but for the time being, I'll read with pleasure). Good job and hope to see a new chapter soon.

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