rate_review Reviews

I absolutely love this story. Extremely well written and seductive. I love mixing the elves and the smart use of torture. I originally read the story of karr and vic from karrs perspective first so when i found this story i was really excited. I have just recently delved into male on male with a few of my toons and oddly enough, one of the couple's are rogues so they use torture and sex as well. I hope you are still writing. Thank you for sharing your toons and some of their experiences with us. You are amazing.

Nice! Simply an awesome story.

there should be a sequel....with the roles reversed....

I gotta say, I really admire all the subtle details in this story that show just how much thought you put into all your characters (well, at least Victor, for sure). the stuff about him being so touchy with the other champions (and Vanresh in particular) shows that you took the time to think up neat backstorys and interpersonal relations that I think really help bring Victor forward and make into one compelling character! Nice work!

Mmm, very hot, but then again you already know what I think of this ;) Victor and Hailin are awesome, just a shame you can't have pet Nelf's in game huh? ><

Yummy. lol It's very good, wonderfully written. Add more to it?
Only problem I noticed was that Victor used Karr's name once before he even told him. I think it was during the little show that Victor and Hailin were giving him. I could be wrong about when though o.o But besides that, I loved it. ^_^