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for I love you Toya

by RenoTurk

person Garlyle
schedule December 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Enchanted Arms... fics? You just made my morning. Or, rather, my 5:30am-before-I-go-to-sleep. But either way, this is wonderful. It doesn't try to do something random or AU with the characters [like so many fics do...], everyone's basically in-character (Toya seemed a bit more expressive, but that's fine given the situation), doesn't try to drown it in an excess of plot or setup, and it doesn't try to write around the smut. The result is a nice, hot oneshot. If you're seeking advice, mine is to build upon the style you used here, because this is wonderful. If you happen to write more in the future, I'll keep my eye on it, so don't disappoint!

~Genis Irving

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