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Okay, before I could finish reading this, I had to check up your note on the german sentence. I speak german, so I can say that the sentence is pretty good, at least the first part, then the spikeball thing sounded weird... and the last few parts, too, cause you basically translated literally.
I absolutely loved the ... well, argument between those two. And bondage is always good, hehe.

C-A

Greetings! Thanks for sharing this nice little piece of fanfiction! If you ever need something translated to German let me know, I´m a native ;-)

Oh my god hilarious! The argument was great! My favorite line: THAT'S FRAUD! I'm going to yell that one day and no one will understand what I'm talking about.

I completely agree with you. That was far too funny not to turn into a fanfic, and I am glad you did.

I really love this story >.<
The way Phoenix and Edgy are fighting is downright hot... just as the "hot szene" itselfs :D
Phoenix is some kinda bad guy and I reeeally like this >.<
What I wanna say, it's just great!!
Is there going to be a sequel?! Please?! That'll be just fantastic!!

Besides I'm German and seriously laught at the part where Miles speaks german :D
Edgey speaking german reminds me of my game <3
It's kinda messep up but almost correct. That's impressive! I know german is difficult =//
Did you do it yourself or with online translation help?

So if there's gonna be a sequel it'd be awesome!!
Great job :D

HaYu

OBJECTION!
lol
I liked it.
It was funny : )