schedule
May 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
The detail within this story is magnificent. I loved the third person story telling, and it reminded me of a old bedtime story, or a children's book, minus the sex part anyway. <3
schedule
March 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Nice little story. Very... storybook. Fairytale-like.
However, I do want to point out that you keep spelling "pegasus" wrong (except in one instance) and that the plurar for "pegasus" is a "pegasi".
However, I do want to point out that you keep spelling "pegasus" wrong (except in one instance) and that the plurar for "pegasus" is a "pegasi".