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February 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hello!
Very cute short story, and funny too!
Hope I can read more about Kyza and Ranulf... ^^
Keep the good work!~
Very cute short story, and funny too!
Hope I can read more about Kyza and Ranulf... ^^
Keep the good work!~
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April 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yayy another Ranulf fic besides mine <3
I'm actually surprised to say I love the pairing. It's unexpected, but I like where it's going alot.
My favorite part? Definitely the two bickering and Kyza lifting up his shirt to prove he won.
The only bad part was the way you ended it. I feel like that you should've ended the chapter on that part, or waiting until the next chapter to do it. The way you ended it, it feels like you cut it midway.
Hope this helps, and can't wait for more <3
I'm actually surprised to say I love the pairing. It's unexpected, but I like where it's going alot.
My favorite part? Definitely the two bickering and Kyza lifting up his shirt to prove he won.
The only bad part was the way you ended it. I feel like that you should've ended the chapter on that part, or waiting until the next chapter to do it. The way you ended it, it feels like you cut it midway.
Hope this helps, and can't wait for more <3
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April 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
hmmm not sure why it didn't go all the way, but I loved the pairing. It's unusual and not something i expected, but I like it a lot. Too lazy to write everythin i had before, keep it up.