rate_review Reviews

Hello guys! Or gals! Thank you soooo much for the reviews. It meant so much to me to see them. This is my first story I've ever published for other people to read. Ever. I thought about it for MONTHS before I built up the courage to write one up. The smile I had when I read your reviews made me feel really good!

Oddly, I'm interested on seeing where YOU TWO believe I planned on going with this as well! So I figured the best way to find out was to just continue writing the story itself! Thank you for your openness, Magnus! Your wish is my command! ;)

This is pretty good, I'm enjoying it, original and intriguing. I look forward to the next chapter. I know you said you wanted reader input and I'm sure some people will add some but personally I'm interested to see where you're going with it first, I think I'll wait a chapter or two. But yeah, nice job so far!

Nice story so far, well writen, and very vivid. When that trap was revealed, I was even startled. I am excited to see what else you might add. As you are looking for imput from readers, I would actually like to find out more about Luce. Also a suggestion for later, maybe Candy could spy on Luce and Tophat. I have a guess on something you might be planning, but I'll keep that quiet for now.

It's pretty good so far, very well written. I will be looking forward to the next chapter.