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June 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
There might be a good story in here, but I get a headache just trying to read it because everything is either a run-on sentence or a sentence fragment. The quotations are kind of messed up, too. That's probably why you haven't gotten any reviews for this story up until now: no one can read it.
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June 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
sorry if ch 1 is a little pit of a pain to read. main reason for it was really to lead us into what we want to read. i promised ch 2 will be much better.