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July 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Nice, save for the feet thing. Though Anri has a crush on Alef? You should write another chapter where Alef seduces her.
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August 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Not too bad. It goes into the sexual stuff too suddenly; I like my PWP to have at least a LITTLE story with it. And human/centaur yuri just doesn't seem to work too well, as a lot of it was unpleasant to read.
The bit with the feet was very creative, though, as well as being a very natural fetish for a human-loving centaur to have. Definitely a step in a different direction.
At any rate, it's nice to see another Shining Force fic on this site.
The bit with the feet was very creative, though, as well as being a very natural fetish for a human-loving centaur to have. Definitely a step in a different direction.
At any rate, it's nice to see another Shining Force fic on this site.
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May 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
HOLY CRAP I havent remembered this game in years! I always loved Mae, I thought she was the best character on the Sega Genesis ever! Her and Khris were my favorites. This was great, I've never read centaur lemons until you write them, and now I wish there were more!
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May 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very nice. Very sexy. Human x centaur sex is awesome and you use it well.
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