rate_review Reviews

I don't read Metal Gear fiction too often but this was one of the more intriguing stories that I've seen in the fandom. Then again, the couple certainly helps. I'm generally up for an unorthodox pairing (particularly if it's done in a believable fashion).

Spelling and grammar were decent. Story content itself was also worthy. I found the "BANG" sections at the beginning caught my attention the most since the word itself is definitely indicative of Ocelot.

I'm not much for wordiness--I'm a terse individual, I admit--so I'll end this review with one last remark. The title of your story amused the hell out of me for some reason.

OOOhhh, kinky!!! xD Since I'm new in the MGS fandom, my one and only couple is Snake/Otacon, but thanks to you, I can have another one! I loved their sadomasochism relationship, and I think they were so in character... You should write more of them, you have the insights on the motivational forces behind their behaviour (hahaha! I copied and pasted the last words from a dictionary, but... you got the idea)

Thank you for sharing with us your work! I loved it!

That was totally awesome and absolutely delicious! Keep up the great work!