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for Of Age and Innocence

by jadedragon83

schedule July 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I LOVED this...ya I was up at 4:00am reading this and I just couldn't get enough lol. Im begging you to make another part though, cuz this is just too good to stop here!
person necrous
schedule June 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I can't give a high enough review to be worthy for this fic.

If you have not already been flooded with offers to write the other side, I would offer my own unworthy attempt.

I have one short-fic uploaded, if you need to see an example of my work.

Lok'tar Ogar.
~Necrous
schedule June 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
YAY! I rulz @ lyfe (with the help of Google). Gwahaha. Thank you very much for the translation. Mucho awesome. And now, *cracks whip*, write MOAR.

*love*
schedule June 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hey... the language is Klingon, isn't it? I'm not a trekkie, but I got curious and Google helped me out. Can't really translate it, though. Translation, pretty plz? Dying of curiosity over here. =D

schedule June 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, okay, ye gods, that was just too lovely for works. Made me all yummy inside.... you simply must write more of these delish troll stories, friend. I would love to offer to try and weave a tale from the Troll's point of view, but while I love WoW stories and know enough about WoW to read them, I don't know enough to write them. I don't play it, see.... but I have friends who do and insist upon telling me about it, harr harr.

So, in conclusion, you simply MUST write more Troll stuff. One wouldn't complain if you penned a story about Orcsies, too. Tee hee. =)
schedule May 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow this is a very hot story. I really got into it. I love the concept of Horde/Alliance sexual encounters. Keep up the good work! :D
schedule May 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I loooovvvveeeee de troll! You're right. He definitely has a presence. My favourite part was when he first rescued her and she screamed when he saw him. I could see him flinching, once eye closed while she screamed hehe. Very very good read! And again...I love de troll haha.
schedule May 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love what you've written here and I might be able to write the trolls POV, unfortunately being female I might have to ask an orc friend to help...or I can send him here to read and make the attempt. Anyway you look at it keep up the good work
schedule May 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
My goodness. I would love to read the story from his point of view. I however, have a very short attention span and have proved incapable of writing anything longer than a paragraph :)Also there's no way i can possibly compare with your skill. Bravo.
schedule May 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very, VERY good! Troll/Nelf stories are a dime a dozen, but you managed to keep me reading :)

What I especially liked was their ability to communicate without the words - many forget that different races speak different languages. Your attention to detail on this is refreshing :)

I have no idea what language that is, but it's fascinating that it's real :)

I want to say "Yes, I'm up to your challenge!" but I'm scared that it'll take me too long to write it or that I won't get the troll's character down. Judge for yourself, though - I have Warcraft fic here, "Beyond the Setting Sun" - read it and gauge for yourself my capabilities...

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