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1. Are you gonna do a Light Jak / Daxter story that goes with this series?
2. are you gonna do a story on how Daxter becomes Elf again?
3. ARE you gonna update glitters story?

“Hey, no sweat. Can’t hurt me squeezin’ anyway. I’m bendy like that.” Indeed, Daxter, indeed.

I'm actually amazed to be reading a one-shot! I knew it was coming, but it was weird not having to click a 'next chapter' button.

Well, tally-ho! *scampers off to read the next story in your line*

This story had serious wibble factor. I was a bit of a mess about it actually. Daxter's feelings are so poignant and completely understandable. I really love the way you portray them, it's quite good and I'm really thrilled that Daxter can hold his own. I look forward to the other stories your working on.

A good, solid sequel. I knew I would like this version better; Goddamn censorship XD. Very well written, though!

Loved the story, as always I wish it were longer...

Though I'm never content unless I get a 30 chapter story...

But keep up the excellent work, can't wait for Sparkle & Shine...

D’awww, wasn’t this just the most adorable thing ever! Your stories are always so heart warming and make me all warm and fuzzy inside. I loved it!

I think Darkkie knows what Jak really wants, lol, that’s what I like about him. Jak is so controlled all the time but in his dark form he lets everything out. And Daxter gets a chance to receive what he wants, some rough loving. *giggles* X3

Oh yeah Jak, I think the little tease is trying to start something. Haha, I loved that part! I can just imagine Jak looming over Daxter, and it gets to our redhead immediately! XD

Thanks for this great chapter, and I must say the smuttier version was even better. :D Now I’m really looking forward to “Sparkle & Shine!”

Well worth the wait for the mature version. As I mentioned in my previous review, characterization is spot-on, fluff is warm and endearing, and it's a wonderful follow-up for Perfect Dark. I have to agree with Kaybrianna though, smut does improve it IMO.

Anyways, I'm liking where this fic is headed, although I'm quite curious as to how a Light-Jak central fic will turn out.

If it's you though, I can already guarantee that it'll be great.



Also, you don't have to overdo it. I don't think your fans will mind which story you write next, so long as we do get more of your fluffy, lemony creations to enjoy.

This was just as awesome as the less steamy version on FF.net!!! Though slighty better, because let's face it, smut makes everything better! I look forward to you future works!