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To Eli Frost,
You, sir, are a god. I only just began reading your Zelda fics, but after the first three chapters of 'Veil of Twilight,' I had to sit down and polished off your OoT story in one sitting. In comparison, I notice Link is a lot more emotional and vocal in this fic. It's different, but different is good; and if it suits whatever story you're cooking up here, then I wouldn't dare naysay it. Please, I beg you, if it is possible notify me when more chapters of this are up. I await them eagerly. Keep up the exceptional work.
-Lord Joshua Carty.
ps. I want nothing less than to impede your story in any way, but TP has such a delicious selection of lady-types... as long as it fits in your grand design, try and show Agitha some love :) She's so adorable, but she needs to have some passion for something that has less than six legs.

Amazing. Great character dialogue.

Your writing is good but I wish that the story would move a little faster. I can't wait for Ashei to show up!

Great job man you really know how to write. I only wish your chapters were longer.
The pacing seems fine to me. Taking it a little slower allows you to flesh out the story more making for a better read.

veeery interesting i like it

A little short, but still great.

niiice sad bit there in the begeing im wondering how rails or whoever will sruvive but i like it very nice ver nice and FINALY! someone eals who is creeped out by the frigign monkeys

Another great chapter man, you know how to get Midna's personality perfectly.

Excellent, good to see the return of you trademark humour.

Excellent as always. Nice CIT nod.