rate_review Reviews

Is this the end? If it is, it's a good one; nice humor at the end to sign off with.

I only read 5 chapters so far, but I thought the story was very good.

I especially liked how you incorporated the poor dialogue from SFIV's cutscenes into the story, and in a way that made sense.

Also, I mean this in the nicest way possible, but I thought it was fucking hilarious that Cammy was scared of getting kicked out of Delta Red on a Don't Ask Don't Tell rule. I don't know if that was your intention or not, but that was just devious of Viper.

Are you going to use Cammy's sex scene as the reason Viper doesn't shoot Cammy at the end of SFIV?

Wow, talk about your revenge. Very hot.

Phone sex ftw. When will Viper and Chun-Li meet up again?

Chap4 was a bit drawn out. Erratic and focused on what people did NOT like. I know that not everything is YES YES, during sex, but I would not focus too much on that during fiction, especially in an encounter without much non-con emphasis. Hope to see more. If Viper is going to assault more women prior to Chun-li, how about Rose? Or maybe chun-li can interrogate the gypsy?
SailorNemesis

This is good stuff. Very exciting.

Keep it up!

Going good. Hope to see more.
SailorNemesis

A fun chapter. Hope to see more. Maybe with fisting...
SailorNemesis

Pretty good. I appreciate Chun-li being hairy. Hope you will write more chapters and continue to have them explore new acts. Further pursue their domme relationship. Keep writing.
SailorNemesis