rate_review Reviews

Thanks for correcting me on Crono's mom's name. I find that sort of stuff out when researching for a story, and always thought she didn't have a name at all. Keep up the good work in the way that feels best to your writing instincts. Specific to the second chapter, I liked how Gina didn't go all the way; sometimes it's more interesting in a story to leave some of it up in the air.

Catalack is one healthy cat to be alive and running races 20 years later...

Haha, kinky couple. Hawt.

Anyway. I sorta hope this doesn't turn into full-on incest, but I suppose that'll end up the whole point (what with Gina fantasizing about Crono and all). Either way, it'll be fun I bet!

I liked this a lot. Keep it going, I can't wait for the next bits!

I'm personally more interested in when/if Crono's mother has sex with her son, but this starts off very well. Not entirely sure she needed a name though. I'll keep an eye on this one.