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December 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad I got here first; especially since I consider myself a purveyor of blood elves playing with thing's they're not supposed to.
For one thing, this story could use a good proofreading. The odd spelling mistake and lack of capitalization is a bit distracting. I say this first because I'm a professional grammar Nazi (no, seriously, part of my job is proofreading essays for ESL students). Second, and this is what actually irked me, a blood elf saying 'Jeeze' is laughably unlikely. Jesus based religions do not exist in Azeroth.
And yet, despite complaining, I rather enjoyed this. More blood elves need to sleep with Alliance girls! I demand it!
For one thing, this story could use a good proofreading. The odd spelling mistake and lack of capitalization is a bit distracting. I say this first because I'm a professional grammar Nazi (no, seriously, part of my job is proofreading essays for ESL students). Second, and this is what actually irked me, a blood elf saying 'Jeeze' is laughably unlikely. Jesus based religions do not exist in Azeroth.
And yet, despite complaining, I rather enjoyed this. More blood elves need to sleep with Alliance girls! I demand it!