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for Every Heart

by littleolmee

person Kiteria
schedule July 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Okay, that was good. I liked the details in it, though I wonder why she wasn't embarrassed to see him naked. Glad to see someone can actually write a story on here, not just a full blown sex scene. Means I might be able to write a few stories of my own. But back to your story. I liked how you described the relationship between Witch and Wizard. I've read a couple stories before and all of them....well I won't say sucked, but none were as good as yours. Update soon, I really liked this.
person Iffi
schedule May 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I really like your story. The wizard is just cute. I hope you update soon.
person Darkmystic
schedule August 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Keeping working on this story, so far its pretty good. ^^
person GillGirl86
schedule April 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm very intrigued to see as to how you're going to show her getting all the gifts from everyone. You've done a fantastic job on keeping the characters believable, their dialog and actions within character, and on keeping the plot line from straying to far. I really do hope to see some more soon. This story is very well written and is a joy to read. It's definitely a wonderful change of pace from the stuff I normally sift through. Don't stop and please post soon. I really can't wait to read more.
person Cyndy
schedule March 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I read Chapter 19 and 20 and it's still amazing as usual. I can't wait for another update :D
person Fei Yang
schedule February 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I've been reading your story since chapter one and I've now finished 20. it's absolutely great and you portray the Wizard perfectly. I can't wait for another update :D
person Cyndy
schedule February 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm looking forward to the second update. Your writing skills are wonderful and this is one of the greatest stories I have read. Please please update soon, I'm dying of anticipation!
person Cyndy
schedule February 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This was an excellent fanfic and I hope you update more soon!
person GillGirl86
schedule February 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Nice way to put it to the Witch. I would have liked to have seen just a little more for this chapter for dialog and reaction. This one felt just a little rushed, but still funny to read how Hikari and Finn put it to her. Keep up the good work hun. I hope to see some more soon!
person theredangel
schedule February 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I really, really like this story. ^_^ Very nice! Please keep going~

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