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Simple, but sweet, sexy, and moving at the same time :) I love how you changed it from "you" to "I", very creative!!

This story needs more views; beautiful, I've read this one a few times that quote was the perfect hook to draw me in and it pops into my head from time to time. I like your style of writing for this, a bit confusing but I'm positive that's how it's meant to be. It's ashame more fans dont enjoy the complexities of such a story, I've never thought of such a thing, but I do suppose Link would be flustered about being so much older. I highly suggest this to any and everyone, this piece really made me think and reflect on my own life; and I'm quite s urprized no one has taken the time to leave you any feedback on it, fantastic job mate

~Onissa-Chan~