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I like how this story is coming along, update soon please!

AMAZING!!!

Please update!

Thank you for updating it. It's just the way one would imagine their meeting to be. I hope you won't drop it anytime soon. Please, keep it up.

(My mother language is spanish and I just have an 80% english knowledge, so I apologize for my misspelings and grammar)

I think it's a very good start, I liked your style so much: simple, natural, fresh... I liked the way your main characters are introduced (made me drool :D)
I'm more a Jack Krauser/Leon fan than Chris/Leon, but your story promises a lot of action and romance ¡¡yay!! xD

I'll be waiting for the next chapters.

Mmm a fight with Chris? Sounds like a plan, I'm in! I'd like to hear more from you, I love your idea and your style of writing. Think you could throw more in there just for me?

All around good characterization so far. I liked the Jill/Chris tidbits. (Heh, of course she’d tease him.) But, yes, I prefer a Leon/Chris coupling more for some reason. I guess I feel their relationship would work better because of the “clean slate” status that currently exists between the two of them. Wesker/Chris is usually a no go for me because of the N/C or H/C warnings.

Ummm… I only saw one spelling mistake, which I’ve pointed out at the bottom of the page. Continue on with the plot, it’s what makes a read a good read.


1. That was when the called. That was always when the called.

- “the” should equal “they” or “he” -

This is going to be so good ^^. I absolutely love the setting.

So far so good. Nothing wrong with having plot, makes it more entertaining! Curious to see what this virus is all about so I hope you decide to keep working on this fic =D