rate_review Reviews

haha, I like Vol'jin. and I like how everyone with half a brain thinks Garrosh is a retard. it's nice to see that at least *some* people think he's an idiot. personally I can't get get over the fact that when you meet him as Horde, he's just a sobbing little bitch, crying about his grandmother's death even though she's not dead!

haha, naw, but this was fun. I liked the confrontation. and Vol'jin's amusement/interest at seeing the Ambassador get hot and bothered.

Loving it so far! Thrall/Jaina is definitely my OTP. I have to agree with the previous reviewer however, that the sexings seem a little rushed. I wouldn't mind seeing the details "fleshed" out a bit more *waggles eyebrows* dohoho.

Good lord, this seems like one heck of an ambitious tale. Omg why are you starting this when you have to finish Gnomergan still! Why would you do that to your poor readers! Haha, how terribly frustrating. Well, I suppose critique-wise, this moved... um, I'd say sorta disappointingly quick. I mean, it does have a "falling down hill" feel, like a boulder rapidly gaining speed, what with starting out all slow and political and SO appropriately tedious and then concluding with Jaina's midnight rendevous with her OTP (squee, so glad you did that!). and I just squeed, which is horribly embarassing and I hate myself for but I have to say I was awfully excited when I realize that's where you were gonna go with it.

But yeah, it does seem like it could use a lot of fleshing out, especially between Thrall and Jaina. I mean, it totally felt like she was rushing into her future there, but then it suddenly kinda just went waaaaay too quickly! I was just like "wait! wait! It can't be over yet! not sometihng this important!"

Ya know what I mean? Haha, or are you not even interested in rewrites and "open drafts" and all that crap? Ah well. I'm still awfully eager to see where this is going to go. Especially with the crazy number of tags. Wow.