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Great story. Though Alistair's personality seems kind of off in your fic. Kind of stand-offish and resistant and not his awkward, naive romantic, and almost clingy self. Although I never "hardened" Alistair so maybe you've based his personality off that so I haven't seen this side of Alistair? Irregardless your story was a good read. Great details and ambiance. Good work! :)

P.S. Sorry if you get notified of this twice. I somehow managed to delete my first review. lol!

I love both parts of this story. Both were very well written and passionate, keep up the good work.