rate_review Reviews

aww even tentacle monsters need love too!!!

That was awesome, and actually a little sad.

Great story! And yes, I also can't believe no one's written this scenario before - after the mercs scene which I already covered in my story this is probably the second most obvious porn-adaptable moment in Underworld, and you've done a great job of writing it. I especially liked the language barrier and Kraken's psychology. Just one thing I'd recommend though: seems like a missed opportunity not to have a really detailed description of the cum-shot and its bukake-style aftermath - but maybe that's just me, lol.