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June 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hey, just throwing you a review to give you my opinion on this fic.
I’m really enjoying it so far. I like the way that, while you are using Bioware’s game as a base and a framework, you aren’t afraid of adding your own touches/conversations/events. While I loved the original game I feel that one weakness of its weaknesses is that its characters feel (like many parts of the game) like they are a work in progress that never quite got finished. I feel you have done a great job in making the characters come to life.
As constructive criticism, I feel that the relationship between Atton and the Exile could be developed a bit. While it isn’t a great fault I do feel like there it could be taken a bit deeper then it is at the moment.
Just my two cents, I really love this fic and I want to thank you for keeping the updates regular, I know how hard it is. :)
I’m really enjoying it so far. I like the way that, while you are using Bioware’s game as a base and a framework, you aren’t afraid of adding your own touches/conversations/events. While I loved the original game I feel that one weakness of its weaknesses is that its characters feel (like many parts of the game) like they are a work in progress that never quite got finished. I feel you have done a great job in making the characters come to life.
As constructive criticism, I feel that the relationship between Atton and the Exile could be developed a bit. While it isn’t a great fault I do feel like there it could be taken a bit deeper then it is at the moment.
Just my two cents, I really love this fic and I want to thank you for keeping the updates regular, I know how hard it is. :)
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June 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love all your stories. I'm quite addicted to them, I think! I love the way this particular one opens. Seems very exciting.