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June 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Loving the Malon scenes, Zelda just doesn't know what she's missing out on. Great twist though at the end of the new chapter! Looking forward to reading more!
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June 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love the way this is written. The only problem I have is within the last chapter.
I don't know...for a moment, it seemed like everything was going to work out for Link. Then suddenly this became some sort of soap opera/Spiderman 3 ripoff where Link was a player and Zelda got pregnant. That was kind of a wallbanger if you ask me. My head's still rattling.
Keep up the good work though...don't go too overboard!
I don't know...for a moment, it seemed like everything was going to work out for Link. Then suddenly this became some sort of soap opera/Spiderman 3 ripoff where Link was a player and Zelda got pregnant. That was kind of a wallbanger if you ask me. My head's still rattling.
Keep up the good work though...don't go too overboard!