rate_review Reviews

Your notes at the end have intrigued me. Damn you! : D

Your fics always manage to get me all hot and bothered this one especially. You touched on one of my all time fav kinks, size difference, and then tossed in anthro and all that fabulous play, I was done for. I really liked the idea of double anatomy and lucky Dax getting two different orgasms... that may be a disappointment when he turns back to a full on male... or not. If I were Dax I would be super proud of Junior! But I love how you are having Jak take this, just going with the flow and not freak'n out about Daxter's furry situation or anything, it is still Dax and still super hot. I look forward to the conclusion

Okay, that was pretty hot. X3 And now, all we have to wait for is the aftermath. XD

OMG lmao Nice image for "Jak's mental meltdown." XD Just as good as an outtake. X3

I can't wait to see how this ends! I'm really looking forward to the next chapter. ^w^

As usual, the hotness ends with an infinitely fluffy cuddle scene...and I absolutely love it. Throw in a concluding chapter to boot? How can we ever thank you Robin?

Well, I felt that your little experiment worked out pretty well. Even though I'm not that much into herm/futa, it was still endearing in its own way. And having Dax use some dirty roleplaying in bed, that was both incredibly hot and pretty damn funny.


Anticipating the last chapter, and hoping you had a great summer!

Been enjoying all of your fanfics. Love your writing. Enjoyed this story. Thought the final author thought was cute. *wink* Does this mean "Sparkle & Shine" will be posted soon?

With this fandom as depressingly inactive as it is, I'm so glad there's at least one good author still churning out quality fic. Seeing an update from you always cheers me up when I'm feeling bummed that all of my other favorite J&D authors abandoned this fandom years ago. (Why did I have to be so late to the J&D party? D8) The fact that your fics are pleasantly perverted is just a bonus. An awesome bonus.

Well...this was interesting. I was wondering why this story had a "herm" tag.


Anyways, well done. This was the first lemon I've ever read that had a character with that sort of anatomy, but it worked nicely in your story. I'm glad you decided to go with both options instead of just the more traditional route. Also, I'm surprised Tess hasn't already burst into their room given how much sound Dax was making; and he's still ready and willing.


Really looking forward to the next chapter.

lol Can't say I was expecting the addition to Daxter's anatomy. XD Still, it's hot. X3

I can't wait for Version 2, though. But I will, because your writing is just that high-quality. ^w^

Oh. My. Goodness. This was so hot. I am SO GLAD I got you to write it you have NO IDEA. XD!! I can't wait to find out what happens, because on the one hand, uh Jak is kind of big for little Daxter to handle. On the other hand? HOT.

*Is totally feeding the plottsels*

Did you know this just made my day? I had a very hard one with alot of work and when i looked up on this site for any new stuff - of course i wasn't expecting some-, you had uploaded a new chapter! Yay!

After i started reading, it was like "Whew, really wasn't expecting _this_..." Not that i'm against herms, but i thought a herm dax might be weird...but it wasn't :D

It was totally awesome! The way you write your storys is really entertaining and its always nice to read! Oh, and i guess i dont have to mention how suggestive it was ;D ( If thats the wrong word..well i guess you know what i want to say.)
But ooow i could hit you with a pillow! You and your damn cliff hangers! I want to know how it continues! Please write the other chapter fast!

(Maybe - is it me or have i seen a few writing errors in this one? Sometimes you forgot letters, maybe you should look it up again.)

Greetings from someone who really loves your stories.