Fantastic writing! I'll be real, I was really surprised and expected this to be a little off-putting given the subject matter, but I'm extremely happy I was proven wrong. The characters are believeable and the writing style isn't just one action happening over another, there's real talent here. Definitely something I come back to and read repeatedly. It seems like you have, but I hope you haven't totally fallen off the face of the earth and care enough to pick this up again with Snake and Otacon. I would love to see how both of them handle something like this and what emotions would emerge.
Chiao
>.< Wow....I loved the seduction and how it was in character...geez man I haven't really played MGS but read so much porn that I know it by heart now @_@
Still keep on making more! This was good