rate_review Reviews

Just want to say, you're very good at writing fighting scenes. I'm sitting on the edge of my seat here and I can't wait to see what happens next. I hope the next update is as fast as this one was. :) Keep up the good work!

This story you have here? Made of awesome. Seriously, I can't wait to see what happens next. The writing is well-done, everybody seems to be in character, and the situation seems plausabile. (Well, aside from Saren suddenly being alive, but I'm sure you have that thought out and that it will be explained later in the story.) And I have to give you bonus points for bringing Saren into this, since he's probably my favorite video game antagonist of all times.

So far, this story is looking good and I'm already drawn in and desperate for more. Keep up the great work! :D

I found your story interesting and I will be back for more. I like your character development and was surprised at the ending.

thank you.