rate_review Reviews

Nice job, I enjoyed the first chapter! Well written and good details. The only thing I could complain about is the length, being on the shorter side but that isn't even that big of a deal. Don't abandon the story!

@bustagroove I did a fair bit of research on this but I think you can appreciate the Street Fighter back story is pretty wide but at the same time not very well documented - it is a fighting game after all. Either consider my work alternate universe (what AFF isn't really?) or that the effects of the mind control are really subtle here.

@doodle Thanks for the typo correction... I guess. Do you have any opinions on the fic outside of suspect grammar?

@anon I've no more plans to write about Cammy unless I figure out another interesting angle. I highly recommend you check out "Breaking Free" by Playing Mantis if you'd like another great Cammy AFF.

Really enjoyed this fic, I love your characterisation and the hate sex. Please write more about Cammy?

I enjoyed the read and you've got a style I appreciate, however, you can take this next bit of critic with a grain of salt. I see time and time again how writer's ignore the history of the character and/or story. Cammy was brain washed nearly the entire time under Bison's command so she kind of 'had' to like what she was doing. I very much would like to read more of Bison's Women and you would make me a happy camper if whomever you used next followed the character's mindset and persona.

Your story has some spelling errors you need to fix like how it says "bought" instead of "brought"