rate_review Reviews

Definitely a nice beginning to the story. You really thought out how to relay Layer's form in comparison to that of a human woman's-- though the splitting tongue kind of made me do a double-take to make sure I had read the line correctly.

Not really sure how to go with that without reading it in use.

Overall a pretty good intro/lead-in prior to the truly enjoyable stuff taking place. I won't rate this just yet however, as I'd rather hold out and see how you take the next chapter.