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February 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Hmm, wasn't as detailed as some of your others. Even without the sex. It just...felt rushed and stuttered compared to the others. *shrugs*
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December 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
So, I just have to say, while I do like the sexy in your other stories (especially the hand's up one, I totally see Jak as a bed-destroyer) this one is a total favie. Sooo sweet. :3 Though I, uh, still wouldn't mind another sexy chapter or two. Or five.
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September 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Please say there's gona be a chapter 2? I really, really like this story!