rate_review Reviews

Oh the humility! Oh that was just....sooooo funny! Haha.....loved it...Poor Jak, i feel bad for him.

I...will never be able to walk by the romance section of a bookstore ever again without cracking up. Jak as a cover model... Damn sexy to think about, but it will haunt me for the rest of my days...and I don't think I'm too terribly sad about that.

well so far so good :o i hope daxter is a huge perv like i know he...she.... should be

>.>

Poor Jak. I feel for the guy. Is the next chapter gonna be Daxter's P.O.V. ? At least Jak got away from Daxter before he had a "big" problem. Poor guy can't catch a break.

Oh...the millions of ways that this can go wrong. I love it! Daxter's such a freakin' cock-tease. The question now is whether it's intentional or just a happy accident. Boy can be oblivious when it suits him. Either way, Jak's gonna need some serious therapy before this is over. Can't wait for more!

Not usually into the gender-bending, but if that's what it takes to keep the banter up between Jak and Dax, then I totally support it. I also agree...somehow, this seems to be Robin's fault. Not sure how, but you two seem to be a bad influence on each other. And by bad, I mean you both get hotter the more you push back and forth, so please, by all means, continue.

I also apologize for not reviewing most of your other work, even though I've read it. I loved "Bad Touch," which pretty much single-handedly got me interested in the pair romantically. But for as satisfying as straight up sex can be, I have been craving a more drawn out storyline in your wonderful writing style. I love that I can never quite figure out what's going to happen next or how things will turn out--most of what I read nowadays seems totally devoid of atmosphere and creativity. I constantly find myself drawn to your work over and over again when I need my inspiration meter filled. I hope this tale gets the attention it deserves and can't wait to see what comes next.

Oh, and good luck with the November Challenge. Every year, it sounds so easy, and then I get to about the 20th and realize I'm nowhere near close to finished, or my brain's hijacked by another interest halfway through, so I honestly wish you the best of everything.

~Satel

i love almost ever jak and daxter story out there :3 rather a ig fan of jak x ottsel tho, but this is still good stuff

LoL...Loved that you blamed Robin for this. Loved the chapter. Can't wait to read the next one. Oh have you read "Dax or Daxter" from fanfiction dot net? This kinda reminds me of it. Please update soon!

What am I hearing? You're blaming ME?! How could you?! XD

Yeah, you can blame me since I never tried to stop you. And I would totally go gay for girl!Daxter, so I guess it's permissible for you to write about girl!Daxter. I know I've seen pretty far ahead, but I still can't wait to reread it all.