rate_review Reviews

Very good chappie:) Excited to see more soon :)

Very nice story, I have to say that I honestly didn't notice any mistakes in spelling, maybe I just didn't spot them if there were any, but it was written well enough that I didn't care, you have a nice way with words. As an avid RP'er myself, I could definitely pick out the plot points that make up a good character backstory. I also find it interesting that your character is on Moonguard, as my character is as well, I might try and find you on there if I can ever get my patches to update on my crappy-ass computer, lol. Anyways, I look forward to whatever else you are planning on writing, 'cause I'll definitely be reading it :)