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Phew! I'll just pour this bucket of ice over my head for a moment...

I really enjoyed this well-written story. It's exactly the right length, with a perfect set up to the sex. I also think the pairing of Sharwyn and Aribeth is a perfect choice, and something I'd never previously considered.

I also think, for the most part, your language is well chosen. Cunt is perfectly appropriate here, because it ties in so well with the medieval feel of the Neverwinter World as is cock. If I had one criticism is that words like "sexy" and "pussy" seem inappropriate against the tone of the piece.

If you plan on exploring this world or this pairing again, I'd love to read it. You write hot erotic fiction.

This was a very, very hot story -- you set the mood for the encounter perfectly, and the way their tryst played out was described incredibly-well and was quite thrilling. Excellent work on this piece; I'd love to see either a continuation of this or another story from you in the same vein.

Very hot and sexy, Sharwyn is my favorite character, and I liked Aribeth as well. And of course, threesomes are pretty much a guarantee to get the blood boiling. :)

It was an enjoyable read and nicely written without being too lengthy. I didn't see any major problems with it, although at times the paragraph lengths were a bit inconsistent. Nonetheless, it's nice to see someone write a story for the under-appreciated paladin. It's odd how few stories involve her, considering how she looks.