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by nekokunoichi

schedule November 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Without knowing anything about the series I still got a kick out of it. A bit more of their physical appearances earlier on, and perhaps a bit more tantalizing detail ;), would have been helpful since the challenges get a different mix of readers. Even in my normal fanfics I like to throw in a bit anyway just to act as a reminder — but I do understand that there's also a word limit, so I shouldn't even be mentioning this...?

Anyway, it was a fun and shocking story, and the details about the snow and the silence were enough to make me feel it. Most importantly, I thoroughly loved the very playful ending. :)

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