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Ahhh, a sweet little love poem. Since poems are also given as gifts it's got an extra layer for the prompt!

Very nice poetry! It was very vivid and evocative and still extremely easy to grasp. Very romantic, too. Congratulations!

I like the poetic style :D Thank you for sharing!

Regardless of fandom I found the poem beautiful. The idea of cherishing the person, every bit of him, is the best gift, but that adoration is also a subconscious yet genuine gift in itself. I love the imagery she uses to describe her lover too, especially that sound of a small waterfall that I can imagine as pleasured laughter.

I'm not familiar with your fandom, but what a wonderfully romantic gift of an afternoon spent loving... nice! :D

I loved the poetic nature of this gift, which feels like a gift in and of itself. Thanks for sharing. PW