rate_review Reviews

he soooo deserved that!

permanent sleep...oh i absolutely love it.

AWESOME ending! Excellent way to use the prompt. Was totally engrossed and I'm clueless as to the fandom, so thanks! PW

The descriptiveness is great, and even if his special pleasure didn't sound appealing to me you really got across how overjoyed he was to finally be living out his long-time lustful fantasy. Still, the asswipe got what he deserved. Now I just hope they cleaned up the princess and got her out of there so that she wouldn't have to live with another, even worse trauma.

(Now I can imagine someone coming in to direct the basement's clean up, ala "Pulp Fiction." :) )

Ah! This was brilliant! I was seething all the way through, but I should have trusted you... a perfect ending! ::applauds wildly::

Well, I guess he'll end up sleeping the sleep of ages! Interesting concept :D