rate_review Reviews

Ok, seriously, this was awesome. I could here all of Ven's dialogue in his voice, this worked so well. I also love just how fluffy this whole fic is, it makes me quite happy. And the ending! I just laughed and laughed. Very well done, I really enjoyed this!

Full disclosure: I really hated the game "Birth by Sleep." Or at least I really sucked at it. I started with Aqua and kept dying.

But anyway, despite that, I liked your story! And I usually go for kinky instead of sweet.
It was very well written, especially considering you are writing a sex scene between three characters, which can be kind of difficult.

This was quite good - please, keep up the good work :D You did an amazing job for a threeway!