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February 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love the poem style of writing, it adds a little something to the story and is very well done!
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January 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I nearly had to go and put a second pullover on while reading this poem. It *felt* cold, so very good use of atmospheric language!
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January 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Nicely done! I liked the moon as a voyeur, very decriptive. Thanks for sharing, PW
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January 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed this one, with such marvelous imagery that I shivered as i read. Icicles, oh my... But the tenderness was also very much there, as ever, and I'm just delighted that you shared this!