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April 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god... amazing. Vividly imagined, detailed, brilliantly phrased... Wow. I love it sooo much.
The whole Protoss as sexy thing... I really honestly didn't think I would ever go for that. But I TOTALLY did. Mixing human genitalia with the very alien... other things... was occasionally confusing, though, like the "burying his member in her up to the hilt" part.
I think the reason a lot of people haven't read this is because you don't do a very good job of explaining foreign concepts. I agree on principle - it can be really cumbersome and take away a lot of the story to be constantly explaining basic concepts in the universe. But I think it's hard for people on this site.
email me at synthwrr@hotmail.com if you want to discuss further!
The whole Protoss as sexy thing... I really honestly didn't think I would ever go for that. But I TOTALLY did. Mixing human genitalia with the very alien... other things... was occasionally confusing, though, like the "burying his member in her up to the hilt" part.
I think the reason a lot of people haven't read this is because you don't do a very good job of explaining foreign concepts. I agree on principle - it can be really cumbersome and take away a lot of the story to be constantly explaining basic concepts in the universe. But I think it's hard for people on this site.
email me at synthwrr@hotmail.com if you want to discuss further!