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for Luka Takes a Turn

by genericpetname

person Kortir
schedule June 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
While the overall stories you're posting are nicely conceived and spelling/grammar is fine, I really wish you'd stick to more 'normal' euphemisms or just drop them completely... stuff like "pussy farts" and "queef" and "tampon socket" are just massive turn-offs for your average reader including myself. I'd give all your stories top ratings if that single change was made. As it stands, I just can't get off on these fics despite my love for the vocaloids because of these euphemisms.

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