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August 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Two words: Fucking Amazing.
I loved it. Just the whole way all the characters seemed to mix and blend in so easily, and the way you wrote Vanitas was very believable and Ventus was adorable and in character at the same time. Also, not many sex fics can actually get me hot, but this one did - I just loved the way you wrote EMOTION during the whole sexual act, which enhanced it to no ends.
I loved it. Just the whole way all the characters seemed to mix and blend in so easily, and the way you wrote Vanitas was very believable and Ventus was adorable and in character at the same time. Also, not many sex fics can actually get me hot, but this one did - I just loved the way you wrote EMOTION during the whole sexual act, which enhanced it to no ends.