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for Making A Mistake

by NakedOwlMan

schedule April 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This was a very funny and interesting fic, the tie in "A sisters Gift" was a joy to read as well. I was wondering if a sequel or other tie in will be gracing us? You writing style and imagination are quite interesting. Keep up the great work.
person zamkotje
schedule March 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Phenominal. The punkification of miranda lawson is awesome, and now theyre working on kasumi! I would love to see how kasumi's makeover goes.
schedule November 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed this whole story but I think the first chapter is my favorite because it's the most subtle and believable.
schedule September 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Okay, all of this has been great, but the last chapter just blew my mind. I loved the description of the punk/slutty Miranda, especially about her getting implants, XD

Really, really looking forward to the next chapter. (Here's hoping Jack comes out on top!)

And writing 8 chapters just for a kink meme? You are awesome!

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