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for Praise Jack

by NakedOwlMan

schedule October 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Okay this story was just funny as hell to read. Yeoman Chambers' response to every problem was just priceless. I could totally see Jack doing this, save the galaxy but still make the entire galaxy her bitch at the same time. Awesome.
schedule May 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
lol,crazy but as long as Jack wins it's all good.
person KatieJay
schedule October 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
You really hate Miranda don't you? Anyways, it was a lol-wtf? fest.
schedule October 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I have only one reaction.

o_O

Lolwut?
schedule October 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
That was surprisingly good! (Well, Jacob's head on a Varren was a terrifying mental image) I need to check out the kink meme more often if this is the sort of stuff they're bandying about.

Also, Simpsons and (Possibly) a CWC reference in the second chapter? Between that and your "Making a Mistake" story, you're becoming one of my favourite writers on here.
schedule October 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
That was... sorta random. I was confused by the whole thing, was it real or was it all a dream?

Either way, still pretty hot. Good work I guess.

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