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Ohoh! VERY VERY VERY interesting so far. I don't really like Meele but I really picture your Edgeworth in such a situation! Please write more with other women like... I don't know, Calisto Yew, Franziska von Karma... the kind of dominating women who would try to make Edgeworth submissive. Hmm... I LIKE IT!

Keep going, and I also like the fact that you're using the first person while writing, it makes the story more vivid! ;)

Awesome!

Fairly good writing although I wonder about how calm he seemed to be. Do you plan to keep this structure for the rest, i.e. a woman from his past surprises him, has sex and then leaves?