rate_review Reviews

Hullo,

Just read chap 24.  I guess this story is long abandoned.  It was mostly a fun read, though I wish there had been less adventuring and more sex.  Never got to Aela or Elisaf or many other hotties of Skyrim.  Your Lydia was fun to read.  Ah well.  Hope your life is working out and hope to see you write something again.

Chap17 was sexy, well-done though not worth THAT much build-up.

Great story so far. Really enjoying it. The sense of humor seems really well done and just adds to Kailev-tel's character and gives him a mmore fleshed out feel.

 

I really hope you continue the story, and I hope to read more soon. Cheers! :)

How goes the writing on this story? I'm interested in the plot and relationship developments as much as I am in anything else in this story.

As one whose favorite character to play in Skyrim is of the scaled persuasion, I have to say I'm very much enjoying this story. Your characters are consistently written and your dialogue is a pleasure to read. You also have a knack for writing compelling romance scenes. (I must admit, after the encounter with Sibbi, I honestly expected them to find that Kees had been waylaid by the whiniest Blackbriar as a means to get back at Kai.) I very much look forward to future chapters in this story. You've definitely prompted me to return to Calen-Fir and see his story through. Wisecracking mountains of Saxhleel man-meat represent!

One of these months :3

My good sir, what makes you think your main readership is male? Generally speaking, most erotic fan fiction readers and writers are female. I can't speak for every woman on the site, but this is certainly right up my alley!

It's a little ironic, because I've been writing a series (still in development) focusing on my female character sleeping her way across Skyrim with only Argonian males! So I'm playing the game, jotting down notes about the various Argonian men and their locations, writing my story, and I start to think, "I wonder if there's a section on AFF for Skyrim fics?" Lo and behold, there is one. And lo and behold again, at the top of the list of fanfics is this gem! I'm surprised and very, very pleased. I had wondered if anyone else had a thing for human females and Argonian males.

To my delight, I've found that your story is long, involved, epically hot (in some parts), and well written. The pacing is nice, the grammar is for the most part correct, the characters are interesting (I've come to love the interactions between Kai and his sister), and you've painted a vivid picture of your main character (plenty of fanservice for us ladies, I think). I've really enjoyed reading this the past couple of days, and can't wait for the next chapter!

This is great, U don't know if you're still writing but you should really continue because this is some of the better fanfiction out there.

This stuff is actually rather fun to read, so don't quit! XD

I wish you would keep writing this story cause i really like it.